Friday 9 November 2012

Ok guys the thing is if i write poems they dont exactly rhyme so dont mind.

Broken Heart

The pain you caused never healed.

The smile you gave left me agahst

The love you gave me was a lie

And now my heart is broken.

 I cried...you laughed

I suffered while you enjoyed 

And now you have left me with a broken heart.



You were my friend you were my confidiant

You said i could count on you

So why werent you here when i needed you?

But the truth is you dont deserve me


1 comment:

  1. Nice poem buddy, to make it rhyme and sound better i made a few changes:

    The pain you caused never healed.
    The fading smile you gave left me
    The love you gave me was a lie
    And now my heart is broken.
    you laughed, i cried
    I suffered while you enjoyed
    And now you have left me with an empty void.


    You were my friend you were mine
    You said i could count on you to be on time
    So where did you go, leaving me to bleed
    With my shattered soul, yearning to heel

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